Monday, May 11, 2009

taking it to the very nature of magic

"I'm better than them" the boy with thick glasses thought to himself. "I just wish I knew where others like me were." Trimmers and his eyes lit up feeling where all the power was and some of the already enslaved Superiors were.

"Oh, this Government will pay for its insolence."

Some time later. Mathis was siting angrily in his cell. Contemplating why his powers had abandoned him. Then the door was ripped off its hinges cutting his ides short and revealed the nerdy boy outside.

Disgusting a jock, though trying to get the point across and create a friendship. "I know how to get your powers back, come with me if you want your powers back." the boy grinned "I think we'll become the best of friends."

Mathis "but how?"

"The loop hole of revenge."

Even later and possibly the next day. It was in DC and in a random school during lunch time.

Mathis "oops, this one knows me." the nerdy kid rolled his eyes "I wish you looked like someone that" he smirked "can be trusted."

Mathis grunted as the pain warped his face. "this had better work."

"Look she's a powerful one, we need her we can't afford for another one to work for the government. If she doesn't agree to come with us make her promise to help you when the time comes."

"right chief"

Walking up to the girl Mathis read the scrap piece of paper one last time "Jessica". Then tossed it to the floor. "hey whats up?"

5 comments:

  1. the basic idea of the post is fine but i don't like the beginning oh and jessica would not be cool with him there, remember? she was there when Ivar caught him.

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  2. oh and the next day is saturday so it'd have to be monday which is quite a while from where everyone else is

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  3. actually i reread part of it, i dont like any of it

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  4. ok, well to answer he looks diffrent now.

    what did you think it said. and what don't you like.

    1 him brakeing out the captured power user
    2 that they can share magic untill he kills Ivar
    3 that there trying to get jessica to not support the government

    if theres anything else i missed please tell me

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  5. interesting concept. I didn't see anything about sharing powers. but I agree, Jessica wouldn't be friendly to a nerd. To prevent future confusion, I would say we post what day it is everytime.

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