A few things that went unexplained in the mind of Victor. Like why he was able to move. Then after he was possessed(the ghost don’t ask) he was able to fight the ghost physically(he said he wished he was able punch him.) But now he was at the top of the parking place and things were getting edgy. The ghost was too mobile and able (he could go through walls). The sun was rising so Victor’s last resort was Diplomacy.
“Marco, Stop!”
“You know my name?”
“You’ve been dead for 14 years-I’m “Sammy” you know, bong buddies?”
“You became a cop Dude! How’d thy let you in with your record?”
“I was under cover; you know it was my job to turn y’all in.” putting his arm around transparent Marco. “But if I was really a pot smok’n druggy, I’d totally.”
“Totally”
“Totally”
“You don’t even care that I’m dead”
“Dude you were a dead beat when you were alive. ”
“Shucks”
“that’s right Marco I’m your friend. Just put down the jeep and we’ll talk about this. I promise I’ll help yah.”
“Promise?”
“I promise to always keep my word.” Shudder “the car.”
“Right, Sammy, right.” Smashing of the car as it fell over the ledge and off the building. “Now that the car is gone and you know you’re dead you can go back. Where ever you came from. ”
A few moments and some grunting from the ghost. Victor “you can’t go back?”
“Well, Sammy, I’m trying.”
“Name's Victor”
“that’s a nice name”
“focus”
“I don’t know maybe it’s like one of those 'I came back for a reason' things. Maybe I need to correct one of those things in my life.”
“Marco you had no life.”
“Maybe I need to get one”
“Marco you're Dead!”
“oh, right”
“let’s see maybe it’s like you have to fulfill one last wish then you can go back.”
The ghost persisted on thinking then spoke “I guess I could really go for a Bong. That’s what I choose, though I have no lungs. Hmmm… May I could posses y-”
“no I’m a cop, I obey the law-“ Shudder, Gah! Why am I getting all these trimmers!
“Sammy, you alright?”
“Victor, and I've got to go home.”
“Home, what’s there?”
“My kid”
“whoa you’re like married”
“No, but Marco you as my witness I won’t rest till I see my kid” Shudder
(FYI shudders symbolize the command being registered. The magic enforcing it, because he said he wouldn’t break his word. Also Victor can’t sleep that morning and takes the bus to his house.)
---back in the hospital
The doctor’s collect themselves off the floor and look at the blood bag that was connected to Victor.
also the ghost can't be seen in day light
ReplyDeletethat post was kind of wierd and that blood would be inside him, that don't slowly put blood into people, at least not that slowly
ReplyDeleteoh and magic will never and can never force you to obey, you can break it, it would just cease to empower you if you did
ReplyDeletethe idea is that he used the magic so that it would enforce what he said.
ReplyDeletethe blood kathider(sp), they got a new one because of the trimmers he was havening. and yes it would have drained but that doesn't mean the rest that were in reserve, couldn't do anything. it was just there to show the line of thought of the Doctors.
read what it says, magic CANNOT enforce anything, it can guide and urge and insist but it CANNOT, not will not cannot, force anyone to do anything EVER
ReplyDeletethe other bit was just superficial
this is all so confusing. even the comments don't make sense. did you change a bunch (Jon)? is there a bunch still in your head not on here (Luke)? What's going on?? Victor went home, right? Broke out?
ReplyDeleteum, my comments are in reference to luke saying that magic was making him obey
ReplyDeleteyes, but it doesn't really say "made him obey" anyway, it doesn't really matter.
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